How do you think this "Roses Are Red" Poem Would work for A Hungover Husband in trouble?

Roses are red

Violets are blue

I'm still really glad

That I married you.



I know what I did

Was really bad

And I really do feel

Like an absolute cad.



But consider the good times

that you and I've shared

and cut me a break

cause my soul I have bared.



Let's just pretend

I knew not what I supped

Quick - give me a kiss

To show we've made up.

How do you think this "Roses Are Red" Poem Would work for A Hungover Husband in trouble?
Not bad but this I must say

If you get hungover - you might need AA
Reply:aww...Its sweet!!!

its really cute...in a goofy way...LOL...but cute!!!

Send her a LOT OF FLOWERS!!!!

.........and then say that poem...^-^

It might deffienently work!!!!

Its just a cute thing!!! XP Just say it with all your heart

...it might just work!!! ^-^

She will so love it!!!!



GOOD LUCK!!!!



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....sorry I do not know any roses are red poems today....me feel sad right know...-_-







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Reply:haha it's dorky but worth a try
Reply:Roses are red

Violets are blue

So is your cheekbone

I'll see you in court



Sorry.



Its a nice poem, but MEAN IT!
Reply:its good but maybe change sum of the words around a lil
Reply:good ver very good
Reply:that is so sweet! It shows your sincere w/your apology. Good luck gettin' out of trouble
Reply:Sorry, it's not going to work. You don't own up to exactly what it is you did. So, by not owning up, it's just lip-service blah, blah, blah. All pretend. Ugh! No remorse.



I LOVE the 1st and 2nd stanzas!



Then, you turn into a schmuck.



Revise Darling, revise.